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Javin Pilotte, but everyone calls me Pilot.
I am a simple person living a simple lifestyle.
I like writing stories about goofy people doing goofy things.

  • Javin Pilotte
    Lots of imagery! I like the mood of the story already, and your writing is beautiful. Be careful of purple prose--though I think you're safe for now, in my opinion, though brushing close! I would like to see this continued. C:
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    Love. Struggle. Discovery.
  • Javin Pilotte
    I started tearing up, literally. You poured a lot of emotion into this piece, and it's heart-wrenching! I haven't read The Color Purple but if this is based off of it, then I must read it! Your way with words is magnificent.
    The White Girl's Game of House
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    Based on “The Color Purple” by Alice Walker. As extra work for English, my teacher set the task of writing a short story and analysis of that story as based on a novel that I’ve read. This, funnily enough,...
    B. Anonymous
    6 years ago
    Thanks... Wow! I didn't expect that kind of reaction at all, not even a little bit. I'm so glad you liked it because I thought it might have been a bit of a risk, and The Color Purple is such a classic book that I wanted to do it justice. You made my day with your comment, so thank you :-D
    Javin Pilotte
    6 years ago
    Hahah you're welcome! I'm glad I made your day. And taking risks with this sort of thing seems like it's rewarding and educational. You seem to be well-read too! Would you recommend any books? :3
  • Javin Pilotte
    You're fantastic at writing different styles! I love the feel of this one~ it has a similar feel to Ifs and Buts but it's in a totally different style with a totally different situation. Nevertheless, I must say that your writing is amazing. I'm a sucker for historical things!
    The Red and the Grey
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    The story, beginning with the death of Thomas Becket, splits into two parts; before and after the aforementioned event, which is the pivotal point of the story. The first half will explore the friendship...
    B. Anonymous
    6 years ago
    I'm also a sucker for historical things, so I thought his might satisfy my craving and I'm so glad that you felt so too! I do enjoy experimenting with different styles a bit as well :-) Thank you!
    Javin Pilotte
    6 years ago
    You're welcome! You're a talented writer!
  • Javin Pilotte
    Wow! I really love Chelsee's voice~ it's interesting to read! You give fantastic attention to detail and I feel like the protagonist is interesting and very fleshed out! I love it! I'm not sure how to tell (I just joined the site) but I sure do hope that this is more than one chapter! I love your writing already~
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    Winner of the Feral Youth Competition. ‘Chavvy’ Chelsee Barne has hair extensions and tracksuits; ‘Chavvy’ Chelsee Barne will bite and she will steal if need be; but ‘Chavvy’ Chelsee Barne has a voice...
    B. Anonymous
    6 years ago
    You've been great giving me all these comments, and I really do appreciate it and my ego is bigger because of it :-) This was for a one chapter competition, so there's only one chapter so far but considering it's over I was thinking about adding some more. Thank you :-)
    Javin Pilotte
    6 years ago
    Ah~ a writer's ego is a fluctuating thing. C: I would totally read it if there was another chapter.
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