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If I had to live by the words I wrote I would either be a mermaid, an Alien Princess, a superpowered heroine or a desperate detective.

Second Drafts

by , Saturday February 23, 2019
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Second Drafts

I recently finished the second draft for Day 723 and thought I'd share my process with you all.


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  • Katie Pharoah
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    This is brave to do. I love the emphasis on certain words, it really brings a different dynamic to the story. The only CC I can offer is to have a summary but that's something really little :)
    It's not your Fault
    It's not your Faul...
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  • Katie Pharoah
    This is good, I even got a slight Lovecraftian vibe off of it, that summary certainly draws you in as well :)
    It lives in the woods
    It lives in the...
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    Something powerful lives in the woods surrounding Westchester. Something that knows your name...
  • Katie Pharoah
    This is brilliant, that start is powerful and the cover is beautiful :)
    ARTIST
    ARTIST
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    a little poem I made a while ago about being an artist
    Nirp
    5 days ago
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    Thank you so much :)
    The cover is actually the orignal poem written from my typewriter, just in a blue folder that randomly had people on it, so I'm glad you like it :D
  • Katie Pharoah
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    This is brilliant, that first line draws readers in and I'm intrigued. Can't wait to read more :)
    House of Thieves
    House of Thieves
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    One for love Two for joy Three for poison Four to destroy
  • Katie Pharoah
    Loving the description, especially the heat imagery in the first two chapters. That summary as well invites you in - can't wait to read more :)
    The Heartbreak Hotel
    The Heartbreak Hot...
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    A Place that cannot be found, but a Place that finds you - when you need it most. The residents here do not have love stories - they have stories of forgiveness, acceptance and most importantly tales...
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