Mumble Discussions: NEW POEM - Oasis

  • Jasmine Green

    mumbled "NEW POEM - Oasis"

    It's been a while since I've posted anything, so to make up for that, here's a new poem I've added to my collection, called 'Oasis'
    P O E T R YA collection of poems portraying what's going on inside my head. Each one is in a different mood, or a different setting, usually described by the title....

    It's probably my most literal one so far, and by that I mean most understandable, obviously still steeped in metaphors!
    I don't think it's anything special, but it was sort of capturing a feeling. So please let me know what you think of it, good and bad and constructive crit welcomed.

    J x