Mumble Discussions: New short story!

  • mellowdramaticllama

    mumbled "New short story! "

    Please read (and give me feedback, if you have the time) on this short story I wrote recently! Not to beg, but I'm begging you, thanks.

    Treelights: A short storyTwo friends help each other find direction during a game of hide-and-seek in the woods at night. A short story.
    PoeticSpaghetti
    2 years ago
    1 Like
    Love it! At the moment I have no criticisms, but I might come back later and see if I notice anything.
    mellowdramaticllama
    Thank you so much for reading!